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Michael Kera
A story told in reverse and forward all at the same time is brilliant! The colored storyline is told backward and the black and white story line is told forward until the ending where they merge together. Speaking for myself, once the Polaroid picture faded and the blood ran up, I realized we were dealing with a guy with a mental disorder. So as the movie progressed, but time regressed in a sense, the reason became clear. I like how the movie was a series of events and causes. Either the script was brilliant or the editor was, or even a combination of the two. Every colored scene is an effect and cause all at once. The pattern I saw is a bit difficult to explain because the opening scene is in reverse, and all the other scenes are played forward, but placed backwards. I will explain the pattern backwards and then as if the movie was being played forward. Some of the causes and effects are the same thing, because a cause causes an effect which in return creates another cause. Effect (Guy is shot dead) -> Cause (Lenny finds a photo in his pocket saying to kill the guy), Effect (Teddy meets Lenny at the hotel) -> Cause/Effect (Lenny writes kill him on Teddy’s photo) -> Cause (Copy of a driver’s license for a John G. who is Teddy/ (Answer to earlier Cause)Teddy says he will be over), Cause (He receives a folder at dinner), Cause (He’s in bathroom). Forward Cause (He goes to the bathroom), Cause/Effect (He receives a folder he left at his table) -> Effect (He finds a driver’s license and calls the number) Cause (Teddy says he will be right over) -> Effect (Lenny writes to kill Teddy) -> Effect (Teddy comes over) -> Cause (Goes to abandoned place) -> Effect (Lenny finds his note to himself) -> Cause (Teddy gets shot). I really hope that made sense. The way this was styled leaves the viewer wondering what caused the incident we just saw.
Following the characters was easy because there were few and we saw them in roughly five minute bursts. Each character was clearly defined. As we start seeing pieces of the puzzle each character’s motives come to the surface. “Teddy” takes advantage of Leonard on several occasions, we just know not to trust his lies, but we don’t know why. Natalie seems innocent because she helps Leonard, but later she is revealed to be a manipulative b!tch.
The way it was written and edited together was amazing. I was not pulled out of the story once. We knew the narrator was Leonard because he lives his life in his head and that’s where we were: The Forgotten Memories, the black and white story and reverse storytelling is what he already forgot. Personally I felt it worked for this story because it would be boring for us as a viewer to watch this man’s life as it keeps progressing forward, as he forgets. It’s more effective if we don’t know, like he does. In the beginning we are at the drug location, and at the end of the movie we end back up there. Really if the story was told chronologically the abandoned house would have been in the middle and ending, but I felt a sense of closure because of the way the movie was pieced together. It brought the story full circle, begin and end in the same location. By the end we find out the whole story.
Michael Kera
This time I’m going to start out with Michael’s Miscellaneous. For this post we need to talk about lens, focus, camera distance, camera angle and camera movement. I want to start off with movement. When was there nota camera move? From what I saw the camera was always moving, even when locked down on a tripod. With the tripod shots there would sometimes be a slight pan, normally you wouldn’t be able to tell, but parts of the background were moving out of frame. There were a few times the camera was still and when it was, it was jarring. So much of the movie was hand-held it felt like a documentary, and Chris/Alexander only broke the 4th wall once when he was eating the apple in the montage. The documentary effect was cool and I feel effective, because we are following Chris/Alexander on a journey and when chronicling a journey, you would most likely go hand-held.
Now we know most of the shots were hand-held with some tripod use. But hand-held is a loose term in my opinion; they probably used a steady-cam, otherwise you’d want to vomit. I want to say there were a lot of long shots andmedium shots. Extreme Long Shots and Long Shots were used more for the “pure nature” scenes and Medium Shots for the people. Even the close-ups seemed farther away from the people. I think towards the end after he ate the poison plant the D.P. started using close-ups. They also used close-ups when he was writing in his journal. The shots made me feel not intimate with the story. It felt like Chris/Alexander was pushing his whole world away, including the viewer. Then again if the whole movie was close ups it would have felt awkward and too intimate.
The angles felt kind of blah. There were a lot of eye level shots.
There were a few high and low angles but none really suggested the visual dominance. It felt like more of a composition decision like our actor is up in a barn loft and we’re down here next to the man pissing on the ground. I may be reading too much into it, but except for the montages the shots were pretty boring. I remember the montages more than the actual movie like the apple montage and the typical “I have climbed a large mountain and now I will stand with my arms out while the camera spins around me.” I also remember the canted/Dutch angel because of how jarring it was. I usually love canted/Dutch angels but this shot looked like something someone learning how to use a video camera would do. It screamed look at this and how artistic it is.
Now for a wrap up of Michael’s Miscellaneous. I enjoyed the shots of the movie, especially in the very beginning, but I hate how it was told. Every so often the movie pulled me in and then spit me back out. During the apple montage when he broke the 4th wall, I couldn’t stop thinking, “is this a narrative or a documentary?” This thought came back to mind when he was dying, couldn’t his “hypothetical” crew help him if he knew they were there? Also there were a lot of zooms, it felt like 90% of the movie was zooms. Now I like a good zoom every now and then, but it got annoying because in my mind zooms go along with documentary style. Too many zooms remind me of home movies. To end on a lighter note, the fly over during the graduation scene gave me chill because I liked it so much. Here is a cool shot to end with. Close up and slight extreme close-up of his eye.


The general consensus between Scriptwriters and News Reporters is Show not Tell. Taxi Driver did an ok job at this. When we first meet Travis Bickle he is at the main taxi garage applying for a job. Right away we discover he has some education and an honorable discharge from the marines because he says so. As the movie progresses we see him writing in a journal and his handwriting is sloppy and he doesn’t have a large vocabulary. He says what he means, but ends up to him rambling because he can’t say what he means concisely. We see his military experience when he practices with his guns and how he works out. Towards the beginning of the movie his home is messy, later while he is on his date with Betsy he tells her how unorganized he is. My favorite show don’t tell scene is when he is getting to know Iris. He is dressed well with his hair neat and how he treats her is almost fatherly. The way he looked and acted showed concern for Iris’s safety.
“Body language often communicates more than words do.” In the beginning, Travis’s appearance is that of a slob; messy hair, unkempt appearance, stubble. He acts as if he has no care in the world. When he meets Betsy he is still unkempt but he has confidence and a cheerful demeanor. He gets the courage to go up to her and talk to her. It seems he might have a glimmer of hope in this dingy world. When he goes on his date with her he has a haircut, suit and cleaned up. He wants to make sure this date goes well so he will have another. During and after the breakup he goes into a slump, he becomes aggressive and messy again. He views the world as evil and needs a good cleaning up. Then after almost running over Iris and meeting “the sketchy man” the one who talked about shooting his wife, he becomes more aggressive and cocky, he buys some guns, and he starts to work out again. He wants to makea difference in the world, and clean the scum from the streets. When he finally meets Iris and talks with her, a new side of him comes out, he cleans up and shows a kind, gentler side. When he attends Palantine’s rally he sports a Mohawk, aviator glasses, and his everyday jacket. At the rally he sticks out like a soar thumb. Then he goes after the pimp to free Iris and get her out of the prostitute life. By the end of the movie, he is almost back to the way he was at the beginning of the movie.
Now for the segment I like to call Michael’s Miscellaneous.

I was a fan of Palantine’s rally speech because the statue behind him also had its arms raised. He chose a good location for his speech because the statue reiterated his point Palantine is for the people.
I also liked the ending shot of Betsy. The reflection of her face floating with out of focus lightsmade it seem almost ghostly, like she was just fiction in Travis’s mind.